Byronyello's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Devotion]

DDD:

@nickholas67 thanks for ruining the ending D:

In terms of gameplay, this game was shit. But, the story was very nice, and for some reason, the ending was still moving to me, even though SOMEONE revealed it.

HappyBlack responds:

Lol'd.
Thanks!

[DJManiax]

Wow!

Great game, and the songs well picked! But some were really hard. AND you included one song that just disobeyed everything I know about rhythm games. That song is Monotune -Respect-. Very hard song. But I can tell it's beatable.

TaroNuke responds:

It's called a "gimmick" bro :V

Look up "In The Groove mods WinDEU".
You WILL NOT be disappointed.

[Fade]

Hmmmmmm!

Very well made, I like the basis of it being a llama, but my only objection is "color" being used alot. I speak English so I prefer "colour". Other than that it is a great, 10/10, 5/5 game!

frozencoin responds:

Thanks a lot!
It was me who translated the game /not actually translated but wrote texts/. And i am not a native speaker, so i can use both "color" and "colour" from time to time)))
I guess someone would've said exactly the opposite if it were "colour"))
Thanks once again.

[Neon Dodge]

Hmmm....

This is very well made, and I liked the fact going diagonally was hard to do because of the block you had to save. I like it.

ProdigalFlashMaster responds:

Thanks :) Next time I should make a game with better art, that doesnt look so random ;)

[spaceship game tutorial]

!!!!!!!!!

Great tutorial for a beginner, though you could of used variables:
Put this in a frame:
var speed:Number = 5
That way you can write "speed" instead of 5 in your scripts, and you can use speed*3 instead of manually having to change each number(in case the speed is too fast, or you can change the speed(on a bonus round or sumat)by on the bonus round's frame putting:
speed=100
Though 100 is alot.

trekopep responds:

Yup. Since I made this tutorial, I've improved in actionscript a lot. I look back on this as something that WORKS, but doesn't work extremely WELL. Variables have become one of my best friends in coding. However, this is, as you said, a beginner-oriented tutorial, so I guess it's okay.

Thanks for the review!

[Most Addicting Game Ever]

Hmmm....

This needs expanding. Perhaps a level system is in order or... something. It really has no substance.
Perhaps these below would be good starting points.

Random items every time?
Levels?
(Adequate) changes between difficulties?
Custom cursor? (lololololol)

Oh, and it's not the most addicting game for me sorry.

ImpactGames responds:

ok. Thank you. I'm mainly trying out a new highscore system.

[World's Hardest Quiz Beta]

Quite good.

I hate people who say "average" and give it a 0. How does that work out? Anyway, Cookie monster is a dick! :( Nice quiz though, and I think its good to take inspiration from good things like The Impossible Quiz.

smartepantssponge responds:

Thanks man! I'm coming out with a sequel, due sometime in March. I hope you'll try it out.
--Smartepantssponge

[Santa's Missiletoe]

Pretty good.

Only probs is that its too hard! Grrr..... I could only get 51......

thinking-man responds:

What are you doing here? It's not Christmas!

[Rotator-Ball]

Do you read the FAQ's?

I think you should read the FAQ's because it explicity says "We do not want "demos" .... ....If an artist has a decent demo then he should consider posting them to the Alphas section."

ArtCrusade responds:

Didn't know there was an Alphas section. Thanks for pointing that out, but I think it's a bit too late already..